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Free Fall

On golden sands, droplets spray,
Roaring thunder, waves do play.
Sand castle life, coastline shore,
Endless summer, past front door.

Under the roof, home sweet home,
Armchair comfort, mind will roam.
Fireplace burning, ashes to the sky,
Year after year, seasons passing by.

Seek dark skies, spin galaxy arms,
Paper cutouts, shimmering charms.
Measure the heavens, rock and gas,
Stellar wonders, thru looking glass.

Crest of the world, snowline shade,
Mountainside valleys, forest glade.
Boundless oceans, shadow bedrock,
Blue sky wonders, sun circle clock.

Within ourselves, life blood flows,
Atmospheric beats, blooms a rose.
Soul and essence, equally created,
Gravity prisoner, wilted and faded.

Ricky L. Mohl Sr.
September 7, 2016

© 2016 – 2017, Ricky Mohl. All rights reserved.

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beautiful flow of words and talented loved it

Pagan Paul

Excellent write Ricky. Nice to read with a great flow.

Robert Haigh

Under the elements life goes on… been that way since the dawn of creation. We hope that it will always be so, and by the grace of God, it will. Nice atmospherics, combined with descriptive imagery in this poem!


Superb poetry again Ricky, you know my opinion of your fantastic rhyming and flow well also I should have said beautiful descriptive powers and an ending that we must wish we had written, just brilliant my friend :)


Five star ,bookmarked, so stellar! You just had my favorites written here with pizazz!
Yes, yay! Ricky!
loved this!

Dang ,enter one in Anything Goes !
Any Poem! I’m waiting for that to happen,my friend and I’m host this week!
C’mon! Don’t make me turn blue holding my breath๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‡๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน